Friday, March 14, 2008
Introduction to Anna banana
My first piece I decide to do is my descriptive paragraph “Anna banana.” It was the first major writing assignments. I wrote my first draft January 1. The reason I chose “Anna banana” as one of my pieces it shows how I best I describe my story by using descriptive words like sight, sound and touch. here are some examples “She smiles with baby slobber pouring out of her mouth, When she looks up at me with her big blue eyes, chubby legs, fat cheeks, short brown hair going every direction, and smile that could melt a ice berg.”I also pick this because I felt like I did a real good job for my first writhing assignments and this was the first time I care about a little kid before.
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